Read watching her by Scarlett Metal Online


Lizzie always played it safe in life with her job in corporate accounting and her boring boyfriends. Frustrated one night while working late at the coffee shop, she meets Brett. He's different than any guys she's ever dated and on a whim, she agrees to go out with him. Brett has a kink he later reveals to Lizzie that helps her become the woman she was always meant to be.CoLizzie always played it safe in life with her job in corporate accounting and her boring boyfriends. Frustrated one night while working late at the coffee shop, she meets Brett. He's different than any guys she's ever dated and on a whim, she agrees to go out with him. Brett has a kink he later reveals to Lizzie that helps her become the woman she was always meant to be.Contains strong language and sexual situations. Intended for adults over 18....

Title : watching her
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ISBN : 17567597
Format Type : Kindle Edition
Number of Pages : 160 Pages
Status : Available For Download
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watching her Reviews

  • PJ
    2019-04-17 15:43

    1 star for a very clean edit. 1 star for a decent story. -3 points for crazy repetition by Brett. He talked like Paris Hilton with everything being, "Babe, that's hot," and a lech, rather than a hot tattoo shop owner. Otherwise, this was just okay. The characters were flat as pancakes. I'm not sure how...crap, I forgot her name...Lizzie, that's it. Anyway, I'm not sure how Lizzie could be so gorgeous and not know it. There was no mention of abuse, so I don't get it. Whatever, I don't care to ponder.

  • Donna ~ The Romance Cover
    2019-03-31 15:45

    Was a very short story, downloaded as a freebie, it was OK, because it was so short it felt rushed, too fast and I couldn't really relate to the characters.

  • Rustys
    2019-04-13 13:38

    A chance meeting at Starbucks has Lizzie and Brett hitting it off right away which surprises Lizzie as she normallydates the “safe and boring” type. Brett is far from boring; sexy, ripped, tattooed and the owner of a tattoo shop while Lizzie is a corporate accountant and doesn’t have muchexperience when it comes to men. Come along for the ride as Lizzie discovers she has a kinky side, one Brett helps to bring out, a side that enjoys being watched while engaged in sexual kinkery.Brett loves to watch Lizzie; it’s a big turn on whether she’s pleasing herselfor someone else.Hot and stimulating sexcapades will have you seeking out your own partner!

  • Dani Morales
    2019-04-04 16:26

    So Scarlett has definitely done it again, but in a different way. I'm not usually a fan of 'watching' someone,especially if it's someone I love with someone else. But hey to each is own and this book sizzles with sexy. Hot club encounters, public exploits in cabs, and a romp with the sexy friend? Watching Her is definitely packed with steamy sex that will leave you needing a cold shower.I wish there was more to the story. I feel like Lizzie and Brett needed more to their story. After reading Naughty Girl and I Remember You, I felt a little disappointed that there wasn't more to this book.They meet, go on dates and have incredible sex. Brett releases Lizzie in a way she didn't realize she needed to be released. She let her guard down with Brett and she began a life she didn't realize she was missing. Taking risks and engaging in fantasies, I hope to see more of their story later on.Watching Her is a short, about 56 pages packed full of desire. I have to admit I wouldn't mind running into Brett, hell he can tatt me up any day! :)

  • ~ Cariad ~
    2019-03-25 13:36

    Not enough substance and what there was was rushed, these two characters didn't gel for me. There's no depth at all to this story. It was hot when he was watching her but other than that it was a bit blah.It wasn't written well enough to be erotic, it was just a quick, smutty read. I'm not convinced that it's helpful to have your 'friends' rate your book a five star read when it clearly isn’t. Fortunately sense prevailed in the ratings once it had been out for a while.

  • Misty Irish-pugmire
    2019-04-09 15:37

    Great short read! Loved the characters and found myself wishing it was a full novel so I could get more of them. Steamy and hot book done very tastefully. Looking forward to more work from Scarlett.

  • Philomena Callan Cheekypee
    2019-04-05 15:31

    Loved it. Only lost a star because it was too short. Would have enjoyed this as a full length story :)

  • Miranda Whore
    2019-04-16 14:41

    Quick and sexy...Talk about a good girl turned dirty girl. Very quick and sexy sweet read.. Three stars and four wet panties.

  • Jeanie V.
    2019-04-08 18:45

    What this book lacks in storyline is made up for in it's steamy scenes ten fold!!! This book was hot!!! Red hot! Boiling! Schorching - and I liked it!!! :P

  • Lisa Love
    2019-04-12 15:35

    This is a short SMOKING HOT story... Free on Amazon as well...

  • Ⓑookish Ⓞne
    2019-04-08 16:41

    Sexy, seductive, lustful, provocative, sinful short read! Need I say more! Thank god for Amazon freebies!

  • Liezel Felix
    2019-04-08 18:35

    Easy fast read. Liked it but I wished that it was longer. It was like reading half of a story. Consider me a new fan, looking forward to reading more of your work.

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    2019-04-15 18:36


  • Kate
    2019-04-08 14:31

    Really (really) short but good. I liked it!

  • Sandra
    2019-04-14 14:37

    3.75 stars.Short, hot little story.

  • TaraTUG
    2019-04-20 19:50

    Its always hard to rate a book when you feel like you need more.That is the thing with short stories there never seems to be enough to get you invested.When the story is hot its hot.The scenes with him watching her were great and the hotel scene could have been really hot, but felt a little rushed to me.I wanted more interaction more feelings.I think if your going to go short then it needs to start out with a bang.When the book makes you tingle you tingle but i wanted more of them finding themselves.

  • SandyL
    2019-04-14 12:35

    Short, sexy story about a good girl who always does the right thing, who meets a "bad boy" who really isn't so bad, but is a lot different than the type of (boring) guy she's used to dating. At the beginning of the book the dialogue was annoying - every time Brett talked to Lizzie he called her gorgeous as a nickname. Every sentence where he spoke he used it. Thankfully, later in the book he starts conversing more normally with her. Overall it was a decent book.

  • Tabitha Willbanks
    2019-03-26 16:39

    *ARC was provided for an honest review*Holy Hotness! Brett and Lizzie explode off the page! Lizzie is a woman who has been in a boring rut with her career and men. She is working late again at her local coffee shop, and in walks in the sexy bad boy of her dreams! Brett completely rocks her world!This was a short and sweet novella that will have you wanting a tattooed bad boy to make your fantasies come true! ;)

  • Diane Holtry
    2019-04-03 11:32

    Brett and Elizabeth's interactions have a natural progression in this story. Time spans are eluded to, making their relationship seem realistic. The sexual relations are HOT. Scarlett Metal did a nice job mixing it up by sometimes giving vivid details while other times giving a general idea of what went down between the two. I will be interested to see how Brett helps Elizabeth possibly discover her kinky side.

  • Melanie Smith
    2019-03-29 12:40

    Talk about a girl coming out of her shell and doing things she only thought about doing but never had the guts to do them!!! Lizzie is a shy woman wanting to be swept off her feet and try new things. Brett is just the bad boy to help her do it. He brings out the adventurous side of Lizzie and helps her with her fantasies. Lizzie in turn helps make Brett’s fantasies come true. It may be short, but it has enough sexiness of a longer book. Well worth reading!!!

  • Jessie
    2019-04-08 17:39

    2.5 StarsIt's only about 56 pages so I wasn't expecting it to be too detailed with the story line but it was literally like reading porn. Hot kinky porn...but there was literally no way to relate to the character because they were just having sex the entire time. I give 5 stars for the sexiness but 2.5 stars for story. There really just wasn't anything to it.

  • Yve
    2019-04-01 14:37

    Fun, quick & sexy read. Lizzie, a corporate accountant, has had a pretty plain life. She's always played it safe but decides to take a walk on the wild side when she meets Brett, a sexy tattoo parlor owner, at Starbucks one night while working late. He invites her to dinner, and eventually invites her to put her inhibitions aside and let her kinky, sexy side come put to play.

  • Mandy Salt
    2019-04-09 12:46

    Lizzie alway played it safe in her life with love and her job until she was in coffee shop when Brett walk in. He was a bad boy who did things to her. To find out what happens this is a must to read I couldn't put the book down until I finished it than read her second book Blurred Line ( a short story). I am sure you would love these books .

  • Dena
    2019-03-31 11:42

    This is totally erotica and I really enjoyed it. I mean when you start a book like this you know it's about sex and you expect it. What I didn't expect is the characters. I liked the interaction and the view of the relationship.

  • Nicky
    2019-03-27 14:43

    this book had no original or interesting plot, I kept fast forwarding the pages hoping to get to something that would grab my attention but it just relied on porn and nothing much else. the end was a bit disappointing and cliched

  • liane
    2019-03-30 18:35

    Read this book to be honest the cover got my attention and I just wanted to read a short story. The title of the book saids it all though. I didn't really connect it til the end. But what a streamy sex scenes

  • S.J.
    2019-03-25 16:25

    This is HOT! Only gave it four stars because of the C word and those of you that read my reviews will know I hate the use of the C word and it would have been a five star book if it hadn't been for that.

  • Ronna
    2019-03-26 19:42

    Simple erotica - more about the sex than the story. Hot moments for sure, but nothing that will stay with you. If you are looking for a little spice between books, and this is still free, then by all means give it a whirl. Not sure I can honestly recommend it otherwise.

  • Duck
    2019-03-21 11:31

    The only thing memorable about this one was when he in fact watched her. I didn't connect much with these two. It was just sex and not much else. Some of it was hot but overall just a quick read to pass time.

  • Lindy
    2019-04-19 13:29

    Not bad, kinda hot but too short & not enough development.