It’s late, he’s hungry, but Ash Kellen has more on his mind than food. His name is Levi Selvin.After hours, alone in the office, Ash realizes there is more than lust for work simmering between them.Once Levi gives him a taste, Ash wants more—even if he has to beg for it....
|Title||:||beg for more|
|Format Type||:||Kindle Edition|
|Number of Pages||:||593 Pages|
|Status||:||Available For Download|
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beg for more Reviews
Decent erotica, but so short it doesn’t have room to say muchWarning: This review might contain what some people consider SPOILERS. Rating: 5/10PROS: - The sex scene is fairly well written as long as you don’t mind two characters getting together when they’re practically strangers.- The story is incredibly short, but it doesn’t try to cover too much ground. Its subject matter (which equates to a single sex scene) is appropriate for the length.CONS:- The focus here is sex, and that makes the characters rather forgettable. By the end of the story, you know the two guys about as well as you know someone you met two days ago and with whom you have had only a couple of superficial conversations.- There’s not room in this story to develop the characters to a significant degree, which makes it a little awkward when one of the guys does some fairly serious soul baring and they’re getting after it about five paragraphs later. This is not about emotional connection; it’s about sex. Which makes the author’s attempts at something deeper (like this: “He hadn’t wanted to feel vulnerable, hadn’t wanted to get close to anyone, but he couldn’t deny the rightness of being with Levi”) seem a little forced.Overall comments: This story is 190 Kindle locations and took me maybe 20 minutes to read. When it was over, it was out of my head immediately: it left absolutely no lasting impression. If you’re looking for a bit of erotica, this is decent, but it didn’t impress me overall.
Beg For More is a short story which steams the pages. In just a few pages, AJ Hardcourt creates two characters with depth. The sex the two share is precipitated by meaningful discussion and real connection, and then the act itself is red-hot!As a short story, there is not a simmering plot, but even so, the story manages to pull at the heartstrings and tug at other parts as well.
Quick and hot, but the short length didn't stop the author from setting a good scene before diving into the sex. My only complaint was the word "knob". It always makes me think of doorknobs, not a penis.
So-so short m/m encounter between an architect and the owner of a construction company when they're working late one evening.
Ash and Levi are hot.
2.5 starsVery short story about a steamy late night encounter between co-workers. The premise is nice and would have made a nice, entertaining story if it had been longer.
would have liked it more if it was longer. You catch a glimpse into these guys lives...and a hot sexy scene
A sexy short about two men that have been working together and fighting their attraction, until this night, when they stop resisting temptation.